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Maybe it’s the end of the world, but not for Candace Chen, a millennial, first-generation American and office drone meandering her way into adulthood in Ling Ma’s offbeat, wryly funny, apocalyptic satire, Severance.

"A stunning, audacious book with a fresh take on both office politics and what the apocalypse might bring."
Michael Schaub, NPR.org

“A satirical spin on the end times-- kind of like
The Office meets The Leftovers.” --Estelle Tang, Elle

NAMED A BEST BOOK OF THE YEAR BY: NPR * The New Yorker ("Books We Loved") * Elle * Marie Claire * Amazon Editors * The Paris Review (Staff Favorites) * Refinery29 *Bustle *Buzzfeed *BookPage *Bookish * Mental Floss * Chicago Review of Books * HuffPost * Electric Literature * A.V. Club * Jezebel * Vulture * Literary Hub * Flavorwire

Winner of the NYPL Young Lions Fiction Award * Winner of the Kirkus Prize for Fiction * Winner of the VCU Cabell First Novelist Award * Finalist for the PEN/Hemingway Award for Debut Novel * A New York Times Notable Book of 2018 * An Indie Next Selection

Candace Chen, a millennial drone self-sequestered in a Manhattan office tower, is devoted to routine. With the recent passing of her Chinese immigrant parents, she’s had her fill of uncertainty. She’s content just to carry on: She goes to work, troubleshoots the teen-targeted Gemstone Bible, watches movies in a Greenpoint basement with her boyfriend.

So Candace barely notices when a plague of biblical proportions sweeps New York. Then Shen Fever spreads. Families flee. Companies cease operations. The subways screech to a halt. Her bosses enlist her as part of a dwindling skeleton crew with a big end-date payoff. Soon entirely alone, still unfevered, she photographs the eerie, abandoned city as the anonymous blogger NY Ghost.

Candace won’t be able to make it on her own forever, though. Enter a group of survivors, led by the power-hungry IT tech Bob. They’re traveling to a place called the Facility, where, Bob promises, they will have everything they need to start society anew. But Candace is carrying a secret she knows Bob will exploit. Should she escape from her rescuers?

A send-up and takedown of the rituals, routines, and missed opportunities of contemporary life, Ling Ma’s
Severance is a moving family story, a quirky coming-of-adulthood tale, and a hilarious, deadpan satire. Most important, it’s a heartfelt tribute to the connections that drive us to do more than survive.

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Severance is the most gorgeously written novel I’ve read all year; when I finished it, I immediately picked it up and read it all over again.” ―Jane Hu, The New Republic

Severance is the best work of fiction I’ve read yet about the millennial condition―the alienation and cruelty that comes with being a functional person under advanced global capitalism, and the compromised pleasures and irreducibly personal meaning to be found in claiming some stability in a terrible world. I love how, in this novel, doom is inevitable, and yet it comes so slowly you might not even notice it. Ling Ma has written one of my favorite novels of the year.” ―Jia Tolentino, New Yorker staff writer

“A satirical spin on the end times―kind of like
The Office meets The Leftovers.” Estelle Tang, Elle

"[A] standout debut. Satiric and playful―as well as scary . . . Ling Ma is an assured and inventive storyteller [and her novel] reflects on the nature of human identity and how much the repetitive tasks we perform come to define who we are. . . . A sardonic wake-up call." ―
Maureen Corrigan, Fresh Air, National Public Radio

"[A] semi-surreal sendup of a workplace and its utopia of rules, not unlike Joshua Ferris's
Then We Came to the End . . . Laced within Ma's dystopian narrative is an arresting encapsulation of a first-generation immigrant's nostalgia for New York . . . Severance evokes traces of . . . Joan Didion." ―Antonia Hitchens, The New York Times Book Review

"How do you fit a zombie novel inside an immigrant story inside a coming-of-age tale? Ling Ma . . . accomplished this feat in her gripping and original turducken of a novel . . . Fascinating."
―Trine Tsouderos, The Chicago Tribune

“Ma’s prose is, for the most part, understated and restrained, somewhat in the manner of Kazuo Ishiguro . . . Ma is at her most deft when depicting this kind of severance: the amputation of the immigrant’s past, preserved like a phantom limb whose pain is haunted with absence.”
―Jiayang Fan, The New Yorker

"Gorgeously wacky."
―Hillary Kelly, Vulture

“Tense and elegant, Ma’s writing here masterfully treads the line between genre fiction and literature. Part bildungsroman, part horror flick,
Severance thrillingly morphs into a novel about self-worth, about the kinds of value we place on our own lives.” ―Larissa Pham, The Nation

“Ling Ma’s extraordinary debut encompasses many genres and might just be the first and only coming-of-age, immigrant experience, anti-capitalist zombie novel you’ll ever need."
The Cut

“Ma’s writing about the jargon of globalized capitalism has a mix of humor and pathos that reminded me a little of
Infinite Jest and a little of George Saunders.” ―Emily Witt, The New Yorker

"I recommend [
Severance] unreservedly: it’s perfect for when you’re living in that space between “oh shit, what if the world ends” and “oh shit, what if the world doesn’t end”―and truly, who isn’t living in that space right now?" ―Katie Yee, Lit Hub

“Ling Ma’s
Severance . . . sneaks up on you from all sides: it’s an affecting portrayal of loss, a precise fictional evocation of group dynamics, and a sharp character study of its protagonist, Candace Chen.” ―Tobias Carroll, Tor.com

"Ling Ma delivers a fascinating coming-of-age novel, one full of millennial culture, post-apocalyptic adventures, and, perhaps most exciting of all, a zombie-like populace . . .
Severance wonderfully demonstrates how the lifestyles we lead now can have a great impact on our future.” ―M. M. Silva, Zyzzyva

"Shocking and ferocious . . . a fierce debut from a writer with seemingly boundless imagination. . . a wicked satire of consumerism and work culture . . . It's a stunning, audacious book with a fresh take on both office politics and what the apocalypse might bring: This is the way the world ends, Ma seems to be saying, not with a bang but a memo."
Michael Schaub, NPR.org

"A suspenseful adventure that doubles as a sly critique of late capitalism."
Boris Kachka, Vulture

"Funny, frightening, and touching.... Ling Ma manages the impressive trick of delivering a bildungsroman, a survival tale, and satire of late capitalist millennial angst in one book, and
Severance announces its author as a supremely talented writer to watch." The Millions

“As debut novels go,
Severance is about as original and assured as they come.” ―Laura Pearson, The Chicago Tribune

"If satirist Gary Shteyngart wrote his version of 2015 end-of-world breakout
Station Eleven, it would be this compulsively readable book." ―Mind Body Green

“Ling Ma’s debut novel tackles countless themes―immigration, work culture, family, capitalism, and the confusing aimlessness of your early 20s―with a dry wit that keeps the horrific digestible, the repetitive laughable, and the pages turning.”
―Marie Claire

"Astounding . . . Ma’s engrossing, masterfully written debut transforms the mundane into a landscape of tricky memory, where questions of late-stage capitalism, immigration, displacement and motherhood converge in such a sly build-up as to render the reader completely stunned." ―
BookPage

"Ling Ma’s debut novel is a weird and funny story that melds an end-of-the-world collapse of civilization with a sharp critique of modern work culture, along with a dose of meditation on grief and the immigrant experience." ―
Chris Kim, OZY

"A brilliantly unsettling dystopian novel following a young woman who somehow escapes a fever epidemic and joins a cult-like group of fellow survivors." ―
Bust

"The book I loved most of all in 2018, the queen of the stack (if you will), is
Severance . . . It’s I Am Legend for the plugged-in, globally conscious, thinking woman. I could not be more obsessed." Siobhan Jones, Book of the Month Club

"Ma's writing is compelling and cogent, perfectly satirizing a world that often feels beyond parody."
Nylon

“[
Severance is] a book about work that puts the work in the context of globalization, a book that is mordant and sad and full of quicksilver allegories. I loved that book so much.” ―Lydia Kiesling, The Millions

"Ma's language does so
much in this book, and its precision, its purposeful specificity, implicates an entire generation. But what is most remarkable is the gentleness with which Ma describes those working within the capital-S System. What does it mean if a person finds true comfort working as a 'cog' in a system they disagree with? Is that comfort any less real?" Buzzfeed

"What Ma accomplishes with her fever-stricken world is what sets
Severance apart. Rather than take the end of days as a chance for the usual pontifications on societal collapse―most seemingly ignorant that we built society from nothing the first time, and we would certainly do it again―Ma uses the disaster trope for interrogation on a scale small enough to lacerate.” ―B. David Zarley, Paste

“A satiric vision that takes in late capitalism, the immigrant experience, and the anomie of early adulthood." ―
Library of America

“With exquisite pacing, Ling Ma alternates between Candace’s precarious present and her childhood as the daughter of Chinese immigrants, and contemplates the possibility of a future in a lonely, blasted world.
Severance is a scathing portrait of a society collapsing under its own ungovernable appetites, as well as a haunting meditation on family inheritance and its loss.” ―Claire Fallon, Huffington Post

"
Severance meets and exceeds the promise of [its] exciting description. In many ways, Severance is a novel of ideas―it artfully blends/bends genre, it boldly indicts global capitalism, consumerism, and materialism―but every one of its intellectual aims is deeply grounded in the richly felt experiences of the narrator. ―Joseph Scapellato, Electric Lit

"For readers who love their literary fiction with a dash of apocalypse, this one's for you."
Bookish

"
Severance shares as much with Then We Came To The End, Joshua Ferris’ meditation on the failure of an advertising agency, as it does with The Walking Dead; Ma plays with voice, alternating between the first-person singular and plural to show how easily an individual comes to identify as part of a collective and how hard it is to have that group fall apart." ―Samantha Nelson, A.V. Club

"Takes the milieu of the film
Frances Ha and mixes in a subdued zombie apocalypse. . . A clever and funny novel that depicts modern urban ennui and a speculative post-apocalyptic world equally well, while using its central contagion as a metaphor to critique late capitalism, globalization, and nostalgia." ―Matt Stowe, Brooklyn Paper

"I consumed [
Severance] like a hungry fungal spore in two days." ―Molly Young

“Ma is satiric about the workplace, in a way that’s less snobbish than Nell Zink but just as funny and imaginative . . . All the best metaphors in the book are cleverly crafted harbingers . . . Her dexterity in joking about capitalism rivals the skill of the great Richard Powers.”
―Kaitlin Philips, BookForum

“Listen, are we just suggesting
Severance to everyone, because everyone in the office read and loved it? Yes, sure. But also, post-apocalyptic novels are perfect crucibles for imagining what happens when the rules we operate under break down.” ―Electric Lit

"Ling Ma's novel
Severance is an astute combination of workplace novel and apocalyptic tale. Smart and filled with humanity, this debut is one of the year's best books." ―Large-Hearted Boy

“This depiction of the Midwest feels unexpectedly of our time, at a moment when coastal nostalgia for the heartland has fixated as much on frontier sentimentalism (prairie dresses, artisanal foods) as it has dead mall videos and ruin porn.”
―Meghan O’Gieblyn, Lit Hub

"A radically understated debut novel . . . searingly underplayed." ―
Constance Grady, Vox

"This quirky satire of office culture . . . imagines what would happen to a Chinese American workaholic if Manhattan were hit by a sudden apocalypse."
Chicago Magazine

"Blends two distinct subgenres into a wholly original narrative."
Vol. 1 Brooklyn

"A biting indictment of late-stage capitalism and a chilling vision of what comes after . . . [Ma] knows her craft, and it shows. [Her protagonist] is a wonderful mix of vulnerability, wry humor, and steely strength. . . . Ma also offers lovely meditations on memory and the immigrant experience. Smart, funny, humane, and superbly well-written." ―
Kirkus, starred review

"Embracing the genre but somehow transcending it, Ma creates a truly engrossing and believable anti-utopian world. Ma's extraordinary debut marks a notable creative jump by playing on the apocalyptic fears many people share today."
Booklist, starred review

"In this shrewd postapocalpytic debut, Ma imagines the end times in the world of late capitalism, marked by comforting, debilitating effects of nostalgia on its characters . . . The novel's strength lies in Ma's accomplished handling of the walking dead conceit to reflect on what constitutes the good life. This is a clever and dextrous debut."
Publishers Weekly

"A smart, searing exposé on the perils of consumerism, Google overload, and millennial malaise . . . an already established audience will be eager to discover this work."
Library Journal

About the Author

Ling Ma is a writer hailing from Fujian, Utah, and Kansas. She is the author of the novel Severance, which received the Kirkus Prize, a Whiting Award, the VCU Cabell First Novelist Award, and the New York Public Library Young Lions Fiction Award. She lives in Chicago with her family.

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  • Publisher ‏ : ‎ Picador; Reprint edition (May 7, 2019)
  • Language ‏ : ‎ English
  • Paperback ‏ : ‎ 304 pages
  • ISBN-10 ‏ : ‎ 1250214998
  • ISBN-13 ‏ : ‎ 978-1250214997
  • Item Weight ‏ : ‎ 9 ounces
  • Dimensions ‏ : ‎ 5.4 x 0.8 x 8.2 inches
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Ling Ma is a fiction writer hailing from Fujian, Utah, and Kansas. She is author of the novel Severance and the story collection Bliss Montage. Published in eight languages, her work has received a Kirkus Prize, a Whiting Award, an NEA fellowship. She lives in Chicago.

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Reviewed in the United States on July 26, 2023
This is the first post-apocalyptic novel I’ve read that does not involve a great deal of violence. There are no marauding bands of survivors and no marauding bands of the ill/affected. (And several of those types of novels have been quite good.) However, this book is instead an introspective and reflective story about Candace, a young woman caught up as one of a very few known survivors in the end of the world. With touches of humor and through gorgeously written pathos and poignancy, the author effectively uses a first person narrative to describe Candace’s background, early life in NYC before it fell apart, during the collapse, and afterwards. Although published in 2018, the novel shows the author’s remarkable prescience about some aspects of our own pandemic experience. The ending comes too soon and will haunt the reader for a long time. I look forward to more great stories from this remarkable and talented writer.
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Reviewed in the United States on July 22, 2020
A few months ago, I was looking for books on office life (I know, exciting!) and came across "Severance" on a list. I recently picked it up to read during "quarantime" not even knowing that the book is primarily about life during and after a worldwide pandemic. But a portion of "Severance" does involve Candace's--the protagonist's--life working in an NYC publishing/distribution firm. She ends up going to work every day, despite more and more people sickening with "Shen Fever," an incurable illness contracted by inhaling fungal spores that originated in China. Ling Ma's evocation of the illness is quite good. When people become "fevered," they continue going about their most common activities, such as folding sweaters at a retail store or driving a taxi cab, but they're totally on auto-pilot and are eventually killed or die of exposure, exhaustion. etc. They're like totally non-threatening zombies, yet still chilling, maybe more so for their lack of engagement with the non-fevered. Candace becomes the final employee to flee her office and indeed one of the last to flee New York City, and this really made me think about my own life. How long would I stay in my office if the pandemic got really bad? There seems to be a fine line between duty and habit, as Candace discovers. She tends to stay at the office for lack of a better plan, lured by the promise of a big payday at the end, but when the paycheck finally arrives, there's nowhere to spend it. Eventually Candace bands together with a small group of survivors making their way to Chicago, but, as I imagine might happen in a situation like this, one of the group members, Bob, emerges as a threatening, tyrannical leader from whom Candace must escape. What are the true motives of people who want to be in charge? We hope these motives are altruistic, but too often they aren't. What I most loved about "Severance" was how multi-faceted it was. The book wasn't just about office life, and it wasn't 100% post-apocalyptic. There were some lovely sections where Candace recalls life with her parents or fleeting relationships she has with men in the city. It's a book about immigrant life, about fitting in (and not fitting in). A lot of post-apocalyptic novels ("Dog Stars," "The Road," "Station Eleven") focus on survival, but there are no hunger games in "Severance," no fight for resources. If you've survived the fever, then you're golden. I liked that freshness in the genre. It seemed to give Ma much more room to write about the other things one would undoubtedly experience in that situation, like loneliness, grief, or memories. After experiencing the Covid-19 epidemic, I can see that some of Ma's speculations are eerily accurate. The breakdown of society can come slowly. People try to keep going about their daily lives. And I really appreciated the braveness of Ma to leave a couple narrative strands open-ended in her conclusion. Some books drag on too long, but "Severance" ended right where it should; a great debut.
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Reviewed in the United States on March 25, 2020
This mindbending novel tells of a worldwide pandemic both before and after it hits! Yikes!!! Too close to the Coronavirus epidemic news, although published before 2019. Ugh!

This first-person narrative of Candace Chen, born in China, raised in Salt Lake City, and now living in New York City, explores her how she lives through a world catastrophe of incurable fevers. Great start, but???

The storyline describes how she survives hostile conditions both before and after an apocalyptic event that changes the world forever. This caught my interest. However, the back-and-forth storylines dampened the suspense and momentum, making the novel more of an introspective story of an observer and apathetic participant.

The book's strengths are its unusual alternating "before" and "after" chapters and how Candace, a young single, struggles to exist in two different worlds, controls so little in her life, and yet somehow sees herself as something other than a victim. Candace's character development plays the dominant role in the plotline, as she learns to move from the passive compliance of her multicultural past and the controlling expectations or demands of others into becoming a stronger, more assertive person. In this context the book has some literary value beyond the disaster parts of the storyline.

The weaknesses of the book are twofold. First, the avant garde dialogue format WITHOUT quotation marks or italics for thoughts expressed internally was a major procedural shortcoming and distraction of the natural reading flow of the story, forcing me to stop consistently to reread passages, trying to understand the author's intentions. So confusing and unnecessary! Perhaps the author should consider first the needs of the reader and the reading experience over any literary suggestions of her writing friends if she wants to create a larger and more loyal following. These cheap tricks in the name of artistic freedom tell readers to go somewhere else with their time and purchase investments. I was continually annoyed and angered at this reader insensitivity, making the book so much less readable and enjoyable. The Audible narration did help by adding different character inflections and pacing; however, many passages lacked the clarity of speaker identification and seemed questionable even for the narrator. So sad!!

The other major weakness was the disappointing ending that failed to bring clarity to Candace's current state of being and possible futures. Although this murky ending will likely motivate many book club discussions, it will likely also leave most readers dissatisfied and half filled after the traumatic journey of just getting to the last page. Not fair!

I was left to wonder the book's correct genre classification and whether this was a contemporary novel or a literary work. It was neither. I see this as a major failure in the book's structure and how the author, like Candace, was trying too hard to please too many people.

I might look at future books by this author, but unless she creates a more focused and compelling story with a more satisfying plotline and ending, I probably will not invest my time or energies trying to decipher and psychoanalyze her intentions. Readers should not be expected to be mind readers.

I wanted to like it better and was intrigued many of the author's creative situations, such as the Mad-Max-like adventures with the post-disaster "stalking" team. Still, I was left with the feeling that neither the author nor Candace were reliable storytellers, given their blurring of reality. Ouch!!

Guess I too became an unwilling victim of this book.
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Lisa
4.0 out of 5 stars Nice Book
Reviewed in Germany on April 22, 2023
I enjoyed reading this book
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5.0 out of 5 stars Loved every single page of this book.
Reviewed in France on August 22, 2021
Fantastic, funny, intriguing, loved every single page of this book. Totally recommend. Will purchase the author’s other books now. Wow
PGG
5.0 out of 5 stars A wonderful book
Reviewed in Canada on January 21, 2020
It’s not enough to write that *Severance* is a critique of materialism or deals with millennial angst or even label it as a “zombie book.” Such a review would tempt a potential reader to think there’s something hackneyed about this book or that we’re destined for a violent walk through a well-known land. But there is no cliché here--not even one. Each page exposes such preconceptions and elicits a revelation. While our world seemingly waits for catastrophe or a sudden violent end, other authors jump to provide fodder for the fascination. But Ma warns us of the sickness of sustained, indiscernible, daily loss. She reveals the dangers of the incessant. How does one write about the deadliness of the banal without creating a tedious or boring read? Read it and find out! Because in this wonderful book, Ling Ma succeeds.
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Joanne Sheppard
5.0 out of 5 stars Brilliant, thoughtful debut
Reviewed in the United Kingdom on April 15, 2019
Ling Ma's Severance is narrated by Candace Chen, a millennial living in New York as the world succumbs to an epidemic of Shen Fever, a disease from China spread by fungal spores which cause sufferers to descend into a sort of trance and repeat in their final days the meaningless routines that linger in their memory: "they could operate the mouse of a dead PC, they could still drive stick in a jacked sedan, they could run an empty dishwasher, they could water dead houseplants."

The fevered are essentially harmless, so this isn't a zombie apocalypse horror story - it's a quiet, thoughtful novel in which the real threat comes not from the fevered but the survivors, who, in the case of the group Candace joins, predictably descend into cultish behaviours that can only end in trouble.

The post-apocalyptic storyline, however, is really only a small part of the book. Interwoven with Candace's experiences after Shen Fever strikes is the story of her relationship with her parents, their move from Fuzhou, China to Utah, and her years living in New York after graduating. In New York she abandons her ambitions to become a photographer and takes a job working in production for Spectra, a firm of publishers. Candace works in the Bible department, doing a job so routine that it sees her plagued by recurring dreams of inadequate paper stock crumpling in printing presses. Candace is oddly comforted by the routine of her job, despite the dubious ethics of sourcing suppliers in China whose staff work in appalling, often dangerous conditions, dying of diseases caused by precious stone processing so that her employer can produce the 'Gemstone Bible', aimed at American teenage girls in the Bible Belt and sold with a semi-precious charm attached.

Candace, perhaps partly because of her immigrant roots, is nagged by a slight sense of otherness, and is curiously detached from the world around her - I don't think it's an accident that her first love is photography, an activity which requires her to observe rather than participate, and yet somehow she also barely notices when the world starts to end around her. However, while she doesn't appear to enjoy her job as such, she is strangely comforted by it, as if its very meaninglessness brings a meaning to her life that's otherwise lacking. When others are leaving New York as Shen Fever takes hold, she continues to turn up to work. Eventually, she's the only employee, continuing to send emails and attempting to schedule production tasks long after the rest of her colleagues have died or fled and Spectra's Chinese suppliers have succumbed to Shen Fever themselves.

Is Candace, perfectly healthy but turning up day after day in an almost empty city to do a job that no longer really exists, much different from the fevered woman she observes in a clothing store, repeatedly folding the same items over and over again as she rots alive? And when her contract is finally over and she decides to leave New York with a group of fellow millennials, armed with "bottled water and exfoliating body wash and iPods and beers and tinted moisturiser" looted from an abandoned WalMart, will she manage to survive in a world without meaning, and avoid succumbing to the deadly Shen Fever which might - just might - be triggered by nostalgia? What might just save Candace, it seems, is her immigrant experience. Candace doesn't feel any real affection for any of the places and things she encounters on her journey across America: for her, the place that triggers those feelings of intense, unnerving nostalgia is her original home city of Fuzhou.

This is a novel of complicated ideas, simply written - but it's also often funny. Candace herself has a detached, observational wit, self-deprecating but never performatively so. It's sad too, imbued with a completely unsentimental melancholy. If you're looking for a post-apocalyptic rollercoaster ride of a novel, this isn't that book, but I loved this understated satire of consumerism, missed opportunities, modern living and the immigrant experience, and would definitely look out for more work by Ling Ma.
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Ellie
5.0 out of 5 stars Beautiful and unsettling
Reviewed in Australia on September 27, 2021
This book is a surprisingly fresh addition to the increasingly-saturated genre of pandemic fiction. The characters are fresh, set in a vivid world of decay.

To increase the unease that comes with reading Severance: read it directly after reading Atomic Habits by James Clear.